If you want to read about adverbs, fragments, or rules thatdon’t apply to English, please check out my previous posts in this series.
Today, I’ll respond to some comments made on my last post.
Briane suggested I should talk about adjectives. Adjectives
aren’t as universally hated as adverbs are, but there are some authors and
editors out there who feel they should be minimized. My hypothesis that hatred
of adjectives goes back to all of the classic 19th century books we
were forced to read in school—you know, the ones where every time a character
entered a new room, the author spent a page describing the setting in minute
detail. Be honest; does everyone read every word of that block of dullness?
These days, probably not. I have heard (I don’t have a source, sorry) that
because back then people didn’t travel or have television, they needed, even
wanted more description. If you hadn’t had much exposure to an elephant, then
you would find a description of one interesting. These days, we already know
what an elephant looks like and don’t need much description to conjure up an
image in our minds.
If the typical modern reader has much more knowledge of the
world, then does that mean she doesn’t need any description? I don’t think so.
For instance, if the setting is historical or fantastic/speculative, then it
will most likely be unfamiliar to her and therefore require some description.
Even if your setting is real and well-known, such as New York City, not all
readers will know it well. Furthermore, everyone will experience the city a
little differently and may therefore not know the city as portrayed in your
story. Descriptions and adjectives help readers experience the story as though
they were inside it.
I think the key to using adjectives and description in a
story is showing experiences and emotions. One of the reasons people read
stories is to experience emotions. The words your viewpoint character uses to
describe things can show the reader much about the character—their education,
their attitudes, and their own emotional state. If one character says a dress
is “as blue as the ocean” and another says it’s as “blue as despair,” then you
learn different things about them.
So, in summary, here are a few guidelines to help you use
adjectives fearlessly and effectively:
1.
Don’t present your adjectives or description in
a solid block of text that intimidates readers. Sprinkle description in in
small doses so the action doesn’t get bogged down.
2 2.
Don’t describe everything; focus on what’s most
important to the character, and by extension, the reader. Is there something
unusual about an object, or something that will be significant later?
3. Make sure the description fits the viewpoint
character. That way, the description serves a dual purpose.
4.
Avoid purple prose. Simple words, such as “red,”
may be just as effective as “carmine” or “scarlet.” That said, make sure your diction
fits your style and genre. Historical fantasy may be more tolerant of extravagant
description than urban fantasy, though there may be exceptions to this rule.
Have I forgotten anything? What else would you add to this
list?
